Monday, January 31, 2011

Dream House Paragraph with Imagery



My dream house is a big mansion that sits on top of the water in Bora Bora, Tahiti. It would have glass floors so you can see the fish swimming at the bottom, white walls, colors everywhere, white and black furniture, and a huge master bedroom. You can taste the wonderful food prepared by the master chef of the kitchen. You can smell the wonderful smells coming from the kitchen and the cool ocean air coming in and out of the house. You can hear the birds singing and whistling outside, and the water's waves rushing back and forth. All the furniture and carpet is so soft that if it was compared to a cloud, it would be softer. Everything in the house would be amazing.

3 comments:

  1. Great job bestriend I like your idea of the fishies!Keep it up

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  2. Hey I just wanted to let you know that this is a really good dream house. Keep up the good work.

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  3. Wow! I love your dream house. But you're brave. I would be scared to live on top of water. -_____-

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