Wednesday, September 8, 2010
“Mouse in the Café Short Story”
Once there was a mouse named Alberto. Alberto the mouse had always lived in many different places and always something felt wrong about it, but Alberto had never had a home to live in where found suitable enough to. So Alberto went on an adventure to search for his perfect home. First he tried to look in a grocery store but there were to many people. Then he tried in a movie theater but the movies were to loud. He tried a doughnut shop but the smell of the doughnut fillings gave him a headache, but at least he left with a doughnut. Next he tried a smoothie shop, but the blenders scared him. He tried in a bank, but the bankers found him and stomped at him to scare him away! Also there was a trap and he knew the cheese was fake anyways. Alberto started to give up all hope of finding someplace to live and sat down on a curb to think about all his friends homes and how nice they were. He wished he could have a home like that! His friend Miguel the mouse had a nice home by the shore in an old lighthouse. Alberto thought that it must be nice to live there. Alberto herd a car come sharply around the corner of the curb which made his train of thought leave and he ran as fast as he could to get across the street without getting ran over. He was panting and stood up to breath better, and when he looked up his eyes widened and he got a fuzzy feeling. On the sign of the building in front of him was Café. Alberto had a good feeling about this. He had heard of them before but he never been in one and he heard they were great places to live by his other mouse friends. He sighlenty snuck through a hole in the wall and came apon a warm cozy shop. It smelled like warm coffee, there was not may people, and it was quiet! Finally Alberto the mouse knew he was home!
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Great story, Rebekah! Just remember to proofread your work and check spelling. There are some words that are not spelled correctly: heard (not 'herd'), too (not 'too'), upon (not 'apon'), silently (not 'sighlently').
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