Thursday, September 16, 2010

“’Everyday Use’ from Dee’s Point of View”

My name is Dee, I was named after my aunt. I really don't like the way our house looks that we live in. I don't live there anymore though, because I went off to college that my mom and my church paid for. My family is my mom and my sister named Maggie. Maggie is smaller then me and is scared. Her scars are on her legs and arms from a fire that happened in our house a while back. Our house is really ugly and is worn down. I don't like the way it looks. Today I am going back to the house to visit them. I am going to bring my good friend named Asalamalakim, but he likes people to call him Hakim da Barbar. he is really funny and I think he will like my little sister. My sister is a little crazy but I love her to death. Every time we take a picture she likes to have the house in the background. I wish she didn't like the house so much. When we go to visit my mom today I am going to ask her if i can have the lid to the butter churner. I can't wait to go see them.

1 comment:

  1. Proofread before posting. There are a few errors that could have been avoided if you had taken some time to look over your work.

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