Reflection on Autobiographical Narrative

On my autobiographical narrative I think that I did really well on my essay because I had added so much more to my essays since my freshmen year and I have become an extremely stronger writer in all my essays and blog posts. I have been able to add more detail, descriptive writing, and also add more meaning into my narratives. I hope that if I continue to write that my stories will get even better. On this essay I think that I might have gotten either an A- or a B+. I really hope that I have higher then an A- also because I am trying to raise my grade. When we first started to write our autobiographical narratives last year I was afraid that I would not be good at writing, but now I feel more confident in writing papers and other things. If I could change one thing about my essay it would be to add more sensory details to my forth body paragraph and also change the way it jumped from part of the climax to my ending. I should have added in a better transition. I hope that next essay I can do even better.

Autobiographical Narrative Final Draft

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Autobiographical Narrative Graphic Organizer

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Autobiographical Narrative Prewriting Form

Ten Most Memerable Days

1. When I was nine I ran away from my foster home.
2. When I was eleven I tried weed for the first time at a park with some friends.
3. On my twelfth birthday I moved to San Pasqual Academy.
4. When I was two my sisters and brother where taken away from my mom.
5. I was dropped off on the curb of Palinski by my ex-aunt when I was five.
6. Jessica and I snuck out of the window at 1:00 when I was four-teen.
7. I ran away from my foster home with a seven month old baby when I was eleven.
8. When I was eight I was chased down the street from three guys in a car.
9. The Police ran after me and some friends when I was ten when I was living in skyline.
10. I met some of my best friends when I was thirteen and fourteen at school and the academy Amy and Janeth.